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A: The hidden tragedy of K-pop girl bands
In Korea, the music and dance field is harshly very competitive. We see some successful K-pop girl bands like: Twice, Blackpink, Redvelvet etc. but this kind of girl bands who won the fierce competition are only in the 1%. So, what happens to the other 99%? If they are poor and don't have any other job, they might become prostitutes because many entertainment agencies are related to gangs in Korea. They have no other choice because they want to be famous and what they've learned for years is only singing and dancing. Korean gangs and agencies abuse this kind of weakness. They force the girls to sleep with some rich men, gang members, politicians instead of getting support from them. The support being an opportunity to be on TV or financial support. Hence, the Korean band field is fairly harsh.

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