Preguntas sobre ejemplos de oraciones con, y la definición y uso de "Industrial"

A: It’s the time in history when we started using machines to replace manual labor.

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A: you could also say: I graduated with a Bachelor’s Degree in Industrial Engineering

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A: × The Industrial Revolution in Japan came up in the middle of the nineteenth century, with the sudden appearance of the U.S. East India Squadron in Tokyo Bay.
✓ The Industrial Revolution in Japan occurred in the middle of the nineteenth century, with the sudden appearance of the U.S. East India Squadron in Tokyo Bay.

× Matthew Perry, the commodore of the steam-powered fleet and plenipotentiary of the United States, forced the dynasty of Shogun, the samurai emperor, to open up a diplomatic relation with the U.S. Before the treaty negotiations in Yokohama, Perry presented the Japanese side with the latest American industrial products of the time.
✓ Matthew Perry, the commodore of the steam-powered fleet and plenipotentiary of the United States, forced the dynasty of Shogun (the samurai emperor), to open a diplomatic relationship with the U.S. Before the treaty negotiations took place in Yokohama, Perry presented the latest American industrial products of the time to the Japanese nation.

× In particular, a demonstration of the Morse telegraph system and a steam locomotive (one-quarter scale) extremely surprised the samurai officers.
✓ In particular, the demonstration of the Morse telegraph system and the steam locomotive (one-quarter scale) surprised the samurai officers.

A: × Industrial revolution
✓ The Industrial Revolution

× Sodium carbonate emerges as a necessity in real life
✓ Sodium carbonate emerges as an indispensable tool in the textile industry.

× At the time, the rich wore clothes made of expensive silk, wool, and linen.
✓ At the time, the rich wore clothes made of expensive silk, wool, and linen. (Were all of the clothes expensive? If so, place “expensive” after “wore.” If not, consider removing it.)

× The industrial revolution mass-produces cotton cloth and supplies it at low prices.
✓ The industrial revolution allowed factories to mass-produce cotton cloth and supply it to consumers at low prices.

× Cotton cloth came out dull gray on the loom, so it had to be bleached clean and chemically treated before dyeing or imprinting.
✓ The cotton cloth that was produced during this period had to be bleached and chemically treated before dyeing or imprinting because natural cotton is a dull gray.

× For this reason, the future of the textile industry in France and England at that time depended on this rare material.
✓ The future of the textile industry in France and England depended on sodium carbonate because of this inconvenient fact.

× In addition, a growing number of paper and glass factories demanded more laundry soda.
✓ In addition, the growing number of paper and glass factories demanded laundry soda.

Is this for a PowerPoint presentation? Fortunately, I’ve dealt with a few too many!😊

A: × The gig economy based on workers from online platforms has already been embeded in our daily lives.
✓ The gig economy based on workers from online platforms has already been embedded in our daily lives.

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A: @Ohmylittletongtong: sounds good!