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9 may 2015
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¿Esto suena natural? According to the fans who got to see the first day of their live concert in Japan, they seem to have sung many old songs like A and B.
¿Esto suena natural? According to the fans who got to see the first day of their live concert in Japan, they seem to have sung many old songs like A and B.
I talked about the band earlier, and this sentence follows. That's why I used "their"instead of "the". Hope this makes sense.
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- Maltés
- Inglés (UK)
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No problem. Ye actually, on second reading, "their" is fine too. I just somehow felt it was a bit off first time I read it.
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"According to the fans who got to see the first day of their live concert in Japan" - probably would make more sense with some context... hmm I dunno ... they "got to see the first day of their live concert"?
Are you just trying to say this: "According to the fans who got to see the first day of the live concert" ... ah ok - ye I think you were trying to say that no? (replace "their" with "the"). Putting "their" there confused me a little.
So I guess I should have ranked it as "unnatural".
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Thank you for your insightful comment.
I talked about the band earlier, and this sentence follows. ( I just picked up this part from the whole sentence) That's why I used "their"instead of "the". Hope this makes sense.
I talked about the band earlier, and this sentence follows. ( I just picked up this part from the whole sentence) That's why I used "their"instead of "the". Hope this makes sense.
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- Inglés (UK)
Natural
No problem. Ye actually, on second reading, "their" is fine too. I just somehow felt it was a bit off first time I read it.
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皆さん投票のありがとうございました。justinc-sanコメントもいただきありがとうございました。^_^
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