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Please correct my sentences.♡♡♡
I have a groupchat with my friends- we went to same elementary school. We're close but we don't see each other because we live far away . So we share many things through chatting. Yesterday I linked a song which comes to my mind in October every year. I suggested recording our voices of singing the song i posted.
And they did!! And it was very very happy to listen to the voices of close friends i always miss but can't see often unless the chat. . And it was very fun as well.
https://youtu.be/yASXg_KqdlA
In Korea the title of this song is One beautiful autumn. day. The lyrics is really beautiful the melody is beautiful. I hope i can translate the lyrics but i can't.
Please correct my sentences.♡♡♡
I have a groupchat with my friends- we went to same elementary school. We're close but we don't see each other because we live far away . So we share many things through chatting. Yesterday I linked a song which comes to my mind in October every year. I suggested recording our voices of singing the song i posted.
And they did!! And it was very very happy to listen to the voices of close friends i always miss but can't see often unless the chat. . And it was very fun as well.
https://youtu.be/yASXg_KqdlA
In Korea the title of this song is One beautiful autumn. day. The lyrics is really beautiful the melody is beautiful. I hope i can translate the lyrics but i can't.
I have a groupchat with my friends- we went to same elementary school. We're close but we don't see each other because we live far away . So we share many things through chatting. Yesterday I linked a song which comes to my mind in October every year. I suggested recording our voices of singing the song i posted.
And they did!! And it was very very happy to listen to the voices of close friends i always miss but can't see often unless the chat. . And it was very fun as well.
https://youtu.be/yASXg_KqdlA
In Korea the title of this song is One beautiful autumn. day. The lyrics is really beautiful the melody is beautiful. I hope i can translate the lyrics but i can't.
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- Inglés (US)
I have a groupchat with my friends — we went to same elementary school which I've forgotten the name of. We're close but we don't see each other because we live far away. So we share many things through chatting. Yesterday I linked a song which annually comes to my mind every October. I suggested recording our voices while singing the song and we did!! It was very very delightful to listen to the voices of my close friends whom I have always missed but can't see often unless through a chat app and it was such fun as well.
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- Inglés (US)
"…which comes to my mind in October every year." — The song annually comes up to your head every October? What sorcery is thisss
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- Coreano
@yo_hyacinth Thank you. I guess it"s because of the title.
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- Inglés (UK)
@unipiaa 😜
I participate in a groupchat with my friends that I went to the same elementary school with. We're still very close, but we don't see each other because we live quite far away. Instead, we now share many things through chatting. Just yesterday I linked a song which I remember every October. I suggested that we record our voices singing the song that I had posted and they all did!! I was so very happy to listen to the voices of my close friends! It was such a fun experience.
I wish I could see my friends more often, I really do miss them; but at least we have our groupchat!
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