Would you please proofread this self-introduction?

Hello. My name is Yamamoto Taiga. I was born and raised in Osaka, and I am still living there. I am twenty years old. My birthday is June 2nd. I am a freshman of University. It takes an hour and a half to go to school by train. I belong to the faculty of engineering. I specialized in mechanical engineering. After school is over, I take on part-time jobs such as a waiter at a restaurant. In my free time,I like watching movies, listening to music and traveling. One of my favorite places is Hokkaido. Hokkaido is a little distant from Osaka, but there is beautiful nature. So I often visit there. My favorite sport is badminton. Sometimes I go to park near my house and play badminton on weekends.I am a kind and honest person. Thank you for listening.

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Would you please proofread this self-introduction?

     Hello. My name is Yamamoto Taiga. I was born and raised in Osaka, and I am still living there. I am twenty years old. My birthday is June 2nd. I am a freshman of University. It takes an hour and a half to go to school by train. I belong to the faculty of engineering. I specialized in mechanical engineering. After school is over, I take on part-time jobs such as a waiter at a restaurant. In my free time,I like watching movies, listening to music and traveling. One of my favorite places is Hokkaido. Hokkaido is a little distant from Osaka, but there is beautiful nature. So I often visit there. My favorite sport is badminton. Sometimes I go to park near my house and play badminton on weekends.I am a kind and honest person. Thank you for listening.

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Hello. My name is Yamamoto Taiga. I was born and raised in Osaka, and I am still living there. I am twenty years old. My birthday is June 2nd. I am a freshman in University. It takes an hour and a half to go to school by train. I belong to the faculty of engineering. I am specialized in mechanical engineering. After school is over, I take on part-time jobs such as a waiter at a restaurant. In my free time, I like watching movies, listening to music and traveling. One of my favorite places is Hokkaido. Hokkaido is a little distant from Osaka, but nature is beautiful, so I often visit there. My favorite sport is badminton. Sometimes I go to a park near my house and play badminton on weekends. I am a kind and honest person. Thank you for listening.

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