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¿Esto suena natural? However, coming through a rocky tunnel, you can find such a beautiful beach that is located beside the harbor.
¿Esto suena natural? However, coming through a rocky tunnel, you can find such a beautiful beach that is located beside the harbor.
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- Inglés (US)
Natural
After passing through the rocky tunnel, you can find a beautiful beach beside the harbor.
This is a little more natural I think
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- Inglés (US)
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After passing through the rocky tunnel, you can find a beautiful beach beside the harbor.
This is a little more natural I think
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Thank you for the advice, jocszie.
In that case, does "However, after passing through the rocky tunnel, you can find a beautiful beach beside the harbor." also sound natural? Or should I erase the word "however" ?
In that case, does "However, after passing through the rocky tunnel, you can find a beautiful beach beside the harbor." also sound natural? Or should I erase the word "however" ?
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@super8 the grammar of that sentence is great! You say more before however right? There has to be a related context before however
Ex. The rocky tunnel is very dark and you might slip on the floor. HOWEVER, after passing.......
This is how "however" is usually used.
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I deeply appreciate your advice and I answered your question.
Speaking of a related context,
(The name of the island) is famous for (the name of the seashore), (the other one), and (the name of the beach). "However, after passing through the rocky tunnel, you can find a beautiful beach beside the harbor."
Therefore, the word "however" is related to the previous sentence.
Speaking of a related context,
(The name of the island) is famous for (the name of the seashore), (the other one), and (the name of the beach). "However, after passing through the rocky tunnel, you can find a beautiful beach beside the harbor."
Therefore, the word "however" is related to the previous sentence.
- Inglés (US)
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@super8 yes you can use however .
But I think using "besides", "what's more", "also" would be better than however in your context
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Thank you for the other comment, jocszie. Following your advice, I modified the sentence. If you are alright, I'd like to listen to your evaluation.
"What’s more, after passing through the rocky tunnel, you can find a very beautiful beach beside the harbor."
"What’s more, after passing through the rocky tunnel, you can find a very beautiful beach beside the harbor."
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