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22 oct 2016
- Japonés
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Inglés (US)
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Please correct my sentences!
Please correct my sentences!
The chilly weather is coming.
I was shivering with cold at soccer field.
When someone saw me, someone said, "You need a sun! " " Keep moving!" and " Welcome to USA winter! I know Japan is warmer than USA in winter."
The last men showed me his belly and said, "You need a cheeseburger!"
I think I'll need a hot coffee, jacket and blanket next time. No cheeseburger.
I was shivering with cold at soccer field.
When someone saw me, someone said, "You need a sun! " " Keep moving!" and " Welcome to USA winter! I know Japan is warmer than USA in winter."
The last men showed me his belly and said, "You need a cheeseburger!"
I think I'll need a hot coffee, jacket and blanket next time. No cheeseburger.
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- Inglés (US)
"It's getting chilly out.
At the soccer field, people saw me shivering from the cold, and told me I need some sun, and to keep moving. One guy said, "Welcome to American winters! It's quite a bit colder than Japan in the winter." The last guy showed me his belly, and said, "You need a cheeseburger!" I think I'll bring some hot coffee, a jacket, and a blanket next time. I'll pass on the cheeseburger."
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