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19 ene 2019
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Chino simplificado
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Inglés (UK)
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¿Esto suena natural? When I bleached my hair, it was too damaged. And I used this one, it took effect.
¿Esto suena natural? When I bleached my hair, it was too damaged. And I used this one, it took effect.
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19 ene 2019
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- Inglés (US)
Natural
Very good. The only thing I would change would be to remove and before I in the second sentence and put and after one in the second sentence. It would turn out like this: When I bleached my hair is was too damaged. I used this one and it took effect.
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- Inglés (US)
Natural
Very good. The only thing I would change would be to remove and before I in the second sentence and put and after one in the second sentence. It would turn out like this: When I bleached my hair is was too damaged. I used this one and it took effect.
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- Inglés (US)
Poco natural
When I bleached my hair, it was so damaged. Then I used another one,and it took effect.

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