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Inglés (UK)
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Please somebody, i need anyne chacks the article!
Please somebody, i need anyne chacks the article!
This story about simple women whose life turned upside down one day. Anny was not a tall, thin and inconspicuous to others. She had a big blue eyes with notes of sadness. She had usual life. Every day she goes to work by the same bus and returned by the same bus. Only five bus stops. on the way back she usually bought bun with poppy seeds. One of the day she returned at home, as usual, drink her tea , read at the book and goes to sleep. She was awake from telephone ring. She arose carefully and started to find sound source. The bell reached from handbag. She opend the handbag and find out the phone!
She looked at the screen and saw the new massage. She didn’t understand anything, but decided to read. In the massage it was written – “If you want change your life – just follow to me”. All remaining night she did not sleep. Next early morning she got a new massage. It was a photo of bench on city station. She didn’t know what to do. She had doubts. But decided to go there in see all at first hand.
All the way to the station she was really nervous – transfered the phone from hand to hand, she was red and pale. When she found the place from the photo she sat down on bench and got massage again.
“ Look at the down…” Under the bench she found out the ticket by train, which will start after one hour and a half. She had doubts again. She afraid! But she had such strong intention of change. She was slipping in the train while it carried her to city when she never been.
On the station she received the massage with photo the Square. On this square was the monument. She asked the way at passers-by. After all she reached the City center square and inspected the statue. She looked carefully and found new photo. There was window target image. She turned and saw this building opposite. It was small building to three levels. She headed straight to the building. Climbed the ladder and saw the door ajar. There was a dark room with chair in the middle. She looked up the beautiful box on the chair. She opened up the box. There were the dress and heels. She put on everything and waited for. Her little heart was beating. She catch the massage – “ Get down”. When she came down the stairs she saw the black carriage. And the Coachman was also there. It was unreal. Like a film or story from childhood. The Coachman opened the door and invited her to sat. She felt herself like a small mouse. The carriage was suffered on the streets. Shortly it reached a big beautiful park with roses, green labyrinths and fountains. It was a dream. The Coachman helped her to enter and showed the way. She goes slowly to big beautiful building, in windows of which was burning the lights and music was heard. At the entrance she saw waiter wearing a red caftan. He opened the door. When she entered the lights blinded her. There were people everywhere. Waiters were carrying the champagne.
At this moment one man approached her. He was smiling and stretched hand. “Let’s go dancing”. After the party they were sitting in the greenhouse. And man told the story. Some day he noticed Anny at the bus stop. She was so pale and thin… but he was astonished by her eyes. So deep, so sad and lonely. He was so astonished that each day was waiting her on that stop. But she overlooked him. And he catch the some idea to put the phone to her bag.
On this scene she wake up. It was only dream. She arose and went to be going. But something change with her at this morning. She realized that her happy not depend from anybody. She need not the champagne, the Coachman and the prince. She really awake. She breathe deeply and was smiling. She came to the stop on got her bus. She was going at work, it need only 5 stops. But her eyes was shining and she looked on parties…
She looked at the screen and saw the new massage. She didn’t understand anything, but decided to read. In the massage it was written – “If you want change your life – just follow to me”. All remaining night she did not sleep. Next early morning she got a new massage. It was a photo of bench on city station. She didn’t know what to do. She had doubts. But decided to go there in see all at first hand.
All the way to the station she was really nervous – transfered the phone from hand to hand, she was red and pale. When she found the place from the photo she sat down on bench and got massage again.
“ Look at the down…” Under the bench she found out the ticket by train, which will start after one hour and a half. She had doubts again. She afraid! But she had such strong intention of change. She was slipping in the train while it carried her to city when she never been.
On the station she received the massage with photo the Square. On this square was the monument. She asked the way at passers-by. After all she reached the City center square and inspected the statue. She looked carefully and found new photo. There was window target image. She turned and saw this building opposite. It was small building to three levels. She headed straight to the building. Climbed the ladder and saw the door ajar. There was a dark room with chair in the middle. She looked up the beautiful box on the chair. She opened up the box. There were the dress and heels. She put on everything and waited for. Her little heart was beating. She catch the massage – “ Get down”. When she came down the stairs she saw the black carriage. And the Coachman was also there. It was unreal. Like a film or story from childhood. The Coachman opened the door and invited her to sat. She felt herself like a small mouse. The carriage was suffered on the streets. Shortly it reached a big beautiful park with roses, green labyrinths and fountains. It was a dream. The Coachman helped her to enter and showed the way. She goes slowly to big beautiful building, in windows of which was burning the lights and music was heard. At the entrance she saw waiter wearing a red caftan. He opened the door. When she entered the lights blinded her. There were people everywhere. Waiters were carrying the champagne.
At this moment one man approached her. He was smiling and stretched hand. “Let’s go dancing”. After the party they were sitting in the greenhouse. And man told the story. Some day he noticed Anny at the bus stop. She was so pale and thin… but he was astonished by her eyes. So deep, so sad and lonely. He was so astonished that each day was waiting her on that stop. But she overlooked him. And he catch the some idea to put the phone to her bag.
On this scene she wake up. It was only dream. She arose and went to be going. But something change with her at this morning. She realized that her happy not depend from anybody. She need not the champagne, the Coachman and the prince. She really awake. She breathe deeply and was smiling. She came to the stop on got her bus. She was going at work, it need only 5 stops. But her eyes was shining and she looked on parties…
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- Inglés (UK)
This story is about a simple woman whose life turned upside down one day. Anny was not tall, thin and inconspicuous to others. She had big blue eyes with notes of sadness. She had a usual life. Every day she goes to work by the same bus and returned by the same bus. Only five bus stops. On the way back, she usually buys buns with poppy seeds. One day she returned home, as usual, drank her tea, read a book, and went to sleep. She was woken by a telephone ring. She arose carefully and started to find the source of the sound. The bell rung from her handbag. She opened the handbag and found a phone! She looked at the screen and saw a new message. She didn’t understand anything, but decided to read it anyway. In the message was written – “If you want to change your life – just follow me”. For the remaining time of the night, she did not sleep. Next early morning, she received a new message. It was a photo of a bench in a city station. She didn’t know what to do. She had doubts but decided to go there and see it first hand.
All the way to the station she was really nervous – transfered the phone from hand to hand, she was red and pale. When she found the place from the photo, she sat down on the bench and got another message.
“Look down…” Under the bench she found a train ticket, which will depart in one and a half hours. She had doubts again. She was afraid! But she had such strong intentions to change. She was slipping onto the train while it carried her to the city where she's never been.
At the station she received a message with a photo of the Square. On this square was a monument. She asked passer-bys for directions. Finally, she reached the city center square and inspected the statue. She looked carefully and found a new photo. There was window target image. She turned and saw this building opposite. It was a small building with three levels. She headed straight to the building, climbed the ladder and saw the door ajar. There was a dark room with a chair in the middle with a box on it. She looked up the beautiful box on the chair before opening it. There was a dress and heels in the box. She put on everything and waited. Her heart was beating. She received a message – “come down”. When she came down the stairs she saw a black carriage and a coachman. It was unreal. It felt like she was in a film or story from her childhood. The Coachman opened the door and invited her to sit in it. She felt like a small mouse. The carriage was suffered on the streets. Shortly it reached a big beautiful park with roses, green labyrinths and fountains. It was a dream. The Coachman helped her out the carriage and showed her the way. She went slowly to the big, beautiful building, in windows of which were burning the lights and music was heard. At the entrance she saw a waiter wearing a red caftan. He opened the door. When she entered the lights blinded her. There were people everywhere. Waiters were carrying champagne.
At this moment one man approached her. He was smiling and stretched a hand. “Let’s go dancing.” After the party, they sat in a greenhouse and the man told her a story. Some days he noticed Anny at the bus stop. She was so pale and thin… but he was astonished by her eyes. So deep, so sad and lonely. He was so astonished that each day he waited for her at that stop. But she overlooked him. And he thought to put the phone in her bag.
On this scene, she woke up. It was only a dream. She arose and went out. But something had changed this morning. She realised that her happiness didn't depend on anybody. She need not the champagne, the Coachman and the prince. She really was awake. She breathed deeply and smiled. She came to the stop and got her bus. She was going to work, but it was only 5 stops away. But her eyes were shining as she looked on parties…
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