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I took saturday intensive courses at school.
I had to get up early ,so reluctantly went to school.After finishing that courses ,I took part in club activities.My team has independence as itu slogan.Though I always have a sence of achievement of it,I'm mentally tired.But I feel like I grow as a human.So I enjoy various experiences. I will do my best again tomorrow!
今日は学校の土曜講習に出た。朝早かったから、嫌嫌学校に行った。講習が終わった後部活に行った。僕のチームは自主性をスローガンに掲げている。いつも達成感は感じるが、精神的に疲れる。だけど、自分の成長を感じる。だから、僕は様々な経験を楽しんでいる。明日も頑張るぞ!
Can you check and correct my English?
I took saturday intensive courses at school.
I had to get up early ,so reluctantly went to school.After finishing that courses ,I took part in club activities.My team has independence as itu slogan.Though I always have a sence of achievement of it,I'm mentally tired.But I feel like I grow as a human.So I enjoy various experiences. I will do my best again tomorrow!
今日は学校の土曜講習に出た。朝早かったから、嫌嫌学校に行った。講習が終わった後部活に行った。僕のチームは自主性をスローガンに掲げている。いつも達成感は感じるが、精神的に疲れる。だけど、自分の成長を感じる。だから、僕は様々な経験を楽しんでいる。明日も頑張るぞ!
Can you check and correct my English?
I had to get up early ,so reluctantly went to school.After finishing that courses ,I took part in club activities.My team has independence as itu slogan.Though I always have a sence of achievement of it,I'm mentally tired.But I feel like I grow as a human.So I enjoy various experiences. I will do my best again tomorrow!
今日は学校の土曜講習に出た。朝早かったから、嫌嫌学校に行った。講習が終わった後部活に行った。僕のチームは自主性をスローガンに掲げている。いつも達成感は感じるが、精神的に疲れる。だけど、自分の成長を感じる。だから、僕は様々な経験を楽しんでいる。明日も頑張るぞ!
Can you check and correct my English?
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“I took intensive courses at school on Saturday.
I had to get up early and reluctantly go to school. After finishing my courses, I took part in club activities. My team has ‘Independence’ as its slogan. Though it has always brought me a sense of achievement, I’m mentally tired of it. But I feel it helps me grow as a human, so I participate in various experiences. I’ll do my best again tomorrow!”
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I took Saturday intensive courses at school. I HAD TO GO TO SCHOOL EARLY, so I RELUCTANTLY WOKE UP. I took park in club activities. My team’s slogan is independence. Though I always have a sense of achievement, I am mentally tired from it. But I feel like I’m growing as a human, so I’ll keep enjoying various experiences. I will do my best again tomorrow!
There could be some minor tweaks here and there but it is a very impressive level from a non-native English speaker. What you wrote could be understood, it’s just not concise.
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