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19 mar 2019
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Inglés (UK)
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Could you correct my English sentences below?
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My elder daughter had a chicken pox last week. She got better now, so she was able to go to a holiday camp today with her sister.
The truth, there was “Disney on ice” at the SSE arena last Sunday.
She had been looking forward to go there for a long time, but she could not. I feel sorry for her. I think her unlucky destiny take after me. Just when every important day I often become sick. We are a mother and daughter.
Could you correct my English sentences below?
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My elder daughter had a chicken pox last week. She got better now, so she was able to go to a holiday camp today with her sister.
The truth, there was “Disney on ice” at the SSE arena last Sunday.
She had been looking forward to go there for a long time, but she could not. I feel sorry for her. I think her unlucky destiny take after me. Just when every important day I often become sick. We are a mother and daughter.
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My elder daughter had a chicken pox last week. She got better now, so she was able to go to a holiday camp today with her sister.
The truth, there was “Disney on ice” at the SSE arena last Sunday.
She had been looking forward to go there for a long time, but she could not. I feel sorry for her. I think her unlucky destiny take after me. Just when every important day I often become sick. We are a mother and daughter.
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My oldest daughter had chicken pox’s last week. Luckily she’s better now, so she was able to go with her sister to holiday camp today.
Last Sunday at the SSE arena the Disney on ice show was on. She’d been looking forward to it for such a long time, but unfortunately she couldn’t go. I feel so sorry for her. She must get her misfortune from me. For example when there’s an important day coming up, I always get sick. We’re definitely mother and daughter.
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- Inglés (UK)
@Emikojapan
My oldest daughter had chicken pox’s last week. Luckily she’s better now, so she was able to go with her sister to holiday camp today.
Last Sunday at the SSE arena the Disney on ice show was on. She’d been looking forward to it for such a long time, but unfortunately she couldn’t go. I feel so sorry for her. She must get her misfortune from me. For example when there’s an important day coming up, I always get sick. We’re definitely mother and daughter.
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