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¿Esto suena natural? "The goverment banned offering a plastic straw to customers, so they started to give you a paper straw. But I don't like it because it seems to melt on my drinks when it's there long, and I feel like I'm drinking a piece of paper with my drink."
- Inglés (US)
Poco natural
The gover(N)ment banned offering a plastic straw to customers, so they started to give you a paper straw. But I don't like it because it seems to melt (IN) my drinks when it's there (TOO) long, and I feel like I'm drinking a piece of paper with my drink.
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- Inglés (US)
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"The government banned offering a plastic straw to customers, so they started to give you a paper straw. →I don't like it because it seems to melt on my drinks when it's there too long, and I feel like I'm drinking a piece of paper with my drink."
Never put but at the beginning of a sentence. other than that Great
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- Inglés (US)
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“The government banned business from offering plastic straws to customers, so they stated giving paper straws instead. However, I don’t like paper straws bs abuse they seem to melt in my drinks when they in for a long time, and I feel like I’m drinking something made of paper.”
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Poco natural
The gover(N)ment banned offering a plastic straw to customers, so they started to give you a paper straw. But I don't like it because it seems to melt (IN) my drinks when it's there (TOO) long, and I feel like I'm drinking a piece of paper with my drink.
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- Inglés (UK) Casi fluido
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"The government banned restaurants from offering plastic straws to customers, so they started to give paper straws instead. But I don't like it because the straw seems to melt when it's in the drink too long, and I feel like I'm drinking a piece of paper with my drink."
(Using conjunctions like "and" or "but" at the beginning of a sentence is actually acceptable, as long as you're using them as a coordinating conjunction rather than a subordinating conjunction.)
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