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¿Esto suena natural? Since I was young, I've dreamed about myself as staying overnight in desert and fall asleep under the sky which covered by uncountable starlights
- Inglés (UK)
Nada natural
Ever since I was young, I've dreamt of myself staying overnight in a desert while falling asleep under the countless starlights. Or you can start it was when I was young, I've dreamed...
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- Inglés (UK)
Nada natural
Ever since I was young, I've dreamt of myself staying overnight in a desert while falling asleep under the countless starlights. Or you can start it was when I was young, I've dreamed...
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Poco natural
It really depends on what you want to emphasise but if it were me I'd write:
Since I was young, I've dreamt about falling asleep under the desert sky, covered by countless stars.
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- Inglés (UK)
- Chino simplificado Casi fluido
Poco natural
The gramatically correct sentence should be: Ever since I was young, I've dreamt about me staying overnight in the desert, falling asleep under the sky, which is filled with uncountable stars.
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Poco natural
I would say - "Ever since I was young, I've dreamt of myself as a student who would sleep fall asleep under a starry desert sky"
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- Coreano
then would it be okay to write
"Ever since I was young, I've dreamt of myself staying overnight in a desert, falling asleep under the countlrss starlights."?
does it sound natural?
thanks a lot :)
- Inglés (UK)
Nada natural
Yep, that makes sense. But u just made a spelling mistake for countless ;) but I'm sure you know that
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- Inglés (UK)
- Chino simplificado Casi fluido
Poco natural
You should add an "and" between "desert" and "falling", not a comma.
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- Inglés (UK)
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