Hello everyone 

I made a song of a breakfast conversation between my granddaughter and grandpa(me) .

If you found any part of strange English lyrics, please let me know.

Reference performance with sound generator
https://youtu.be/JXaDHAHihgs

Breakfast With Granddaughter

( 5 bar : Granddaughter ♪〜 )
Gran-d-pa oh Gran-d pa What are you doing-now?
Why do you look so seri-ous Is some-thing wrong?
You ha-ven't have a bite to e-at all this mor-ning long Aren't you hun-gry at all

( 14 : Grandpa ♪〜 )
What time is it now? ( 15 : Granddaughter ）10 o’clock !
Some-time I get ab-sorbed..
then I for-get the time yo-u know

( 18 : Granddaughter ♪〜 )
Gran-d-pa t-ruth be to-ld you have al-ways been that way
　

( 24 : Grandpa ♪〜 )
Grand-pa ne-ver for-gets your words
love-ly grand-daug-ther
You said break-fast is im-por-tant

( 32 : Granddaughter ♪〜 )
If you don't eat break-fast no-thing at-all
You can't get enegy to do wor-king 　

( 39 : Grandpa ♪〜 )
When grand-pa was same in your today's age Grand-pa's grand-pa was saying

( 43 : Granddaughter ♪〜 )
What did he say?

( 44 : Grandpa ♪〜 )
What a nice break-fast eat with you

( 46 : Granddaughter ♪〜 )
Oh! What were you ea-ti-ng?

( 48 : Grandpa ♪〜 )
My grand-pa said "break-fast is a joy wi-th you"

( 50 : Granddaughter ♪〜 )
Did you eat hum and eggs with grand-pa ?

( 52 : Grandpa ♪〜 )　
And he said "it is the joy to live" 　 ( 53 : Granddaughter ♪〜 ) Looks deli-cious! 　

( 55 : Granddaughter ♪〜 ) &　( 55 : Grandpa ♪〜 )　
Thank you for the fo-od

Question

Hello everyone 


I made a song of a breakfast conversation between my granddaughter and grandpa(me) .

 If you found any part of strange English lyrics, please let me know.

Reference performance with sound generator
https://youtu.be/JXaDHAHihgs


Breakfast With Granddaughter 

( 5 bar : Granddaughter ♪〜 )
Gran-d-pa oh Gran-d pa What are you doing-now?   
Why do you look so seri-ous Is some-thing wrong?  
You ha-ven't have a bite to e-at all this mor-ning long Aren't you hun-gry at all 


( 14 : Grandpa ♪〜 )
What time is it now?     ( 15 : Granddaughter ）10 o’clock !
Some-time I get ab-sorbed.. 
then I for-get the time yo-u know 

 
 ( 18 : Granddaughter ♪〜 )
 Gran-d-pa t-ruth be to-ld you have al-ways been that way 
　

( 24 : Grandpa ♪〜 )
Grand-pa ne-ver for-gets your words 
love-ly grand-daug-ther 
You said break-fast is im-por-tant 

 ( 32 : Granddaughter ♪〜 )
If you don't eat break-fast no-thing at-all 
You can't get enegy to do wor-king 　
 
 ( 39 : Grandpa ♪〜 )
 When grand-pa was same in your today's age Grand-pa's grand-pa was saying


 ( 43 :  Granddaughter ♪〜 )
What did he say? 

 ( 44 :  Grandpa ♪〜 )
What a nice break-fast eat with you


 ( 46 : Granddaughter ♪〜 )
  Oh!  What were you ea-ti-ng?  

 ( 48 : Grandpa ♪〜 )
My  grand-pa said "break-fast is a joy wi-th you" 


 ( 50 : Granddaughter ♪〜 )
Did you eat hum and eggs with grand-pa ? 


 ( 52 : Grandpa ♪〜 )　
And he said "it is the joy to live" 　   ( 53 : Granddaughter ♪〜 ) Looks deli-cious! 　


( 55 : Granddaughter ♪〜 ) &　( 55 : Grandpa ♪〜 )　
Thank you for the fo-od

BastianJones · Accepted Answer

In the first paragraph “haven’t have” should be “haven’t had”
In the second paragraph “sometime” should be “sometimes”
In the fifth paragraph “to do work” should be “to work”, “for working” or “so you can work” 
In the sixth paragraph, “When Grandpa was same in today’s age” would be better as “When (your) grandpa was your age” your is optional. You could also replace “was saying” with “said”
In paragraph eleven you put “hum and eggs” did you mean “ham and eggs”?

BastianJones · Answer

It’s also worth mentioning that you can say thing in songs that you couldn’t say normally “all this morning long” for example is completely correct but it’s so poetic it would usually sound unnatural if you said in conversation.

It’s also worth mentioning that you can say thing in songs that you couldn’t say normally “all this morning long” for example is completely correct but it’s so poetic it would usually sound unnatural if you said in conversation.

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