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Inglés (US)
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¿Esto suena natural? Static Visual Activity starts to decline at 40, once our age goes over 60, the activity falls below 80% of what those in their 30s show.
¿Esto suena natural? Static Visual Activity starts to decline at 40, once our age goes over 60, the activity falls below 80% of what those in their 30s show.
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- Inglés (US)
Natural
The only suggestion I would give from a grammatical standpoint is to put a period between "40" and "once" instead of a comma. It will be more concise while reading.
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@kadenonio you're perfectly right. Thank you!
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