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10 oct 2019
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Alemán
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Inglés (UK)
Pregunta de Inglés (UK)
have i written the text correctly ?
Dear grandson,
I'm very surprised with this news, because you were always the breadwinner of your family and now you will a stay-at-home father to be dedicated to your baby. In my time, the women, were who raised the children and also wore the pants in the relationship.
On the other hand, I'm very happy that your wife wants to join the workforce after 3 months of maternity leave wheter it is her wish.
have i written the text correctly ?
Dear grandson,
I'm very surprised with this news, because you were always the breadwinner of your family and now you will a stay-at-home father to be dedicated to your baby. In my time, the women, were who raised the children and also wore the pants in the relationship.
On the other hand, I'm very happy that your wife wants to join the workforce after 3 months of maternity leave wheter it is her wish.
Dear grandson,
I'm very surprised with this news, because you were always the breadwinner of your family and now you will a stay-at-home father to be dedicated to your baby. In my time, the women, were who raised the children and also wore the pants in the relationship.
On the other hand, I'm very happy that your wife wants to join the workforce after 3 months of maternity leave wheter it is her wish.
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- Inglés (UK)
It's pretty good. I've retyped it with a couple of corrections for you. I have made the assumption that the wife worked before pregnancy and was returning to work. I've added a different wording at the bottom if this is not the case.
Dear grandson,
I'm very surprised AT this news, because you were always the breadwinner of THE family and now YOURE GOING TO BE a stay-at-home father dedicated to your baby. In my time THE WOMEN WERE THE ONES WHO raised the children, and also wore the pants in the relationship. HOWEVER I'm very happy TO HEAR that your **wife wants to RETURN TO WORK** after 3 months of maternity leave.
**wife wants to start working**
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- Español (España)
@TurtleBlossom thank you for your help ! is it okay to say "I'm very happy to hear that your wife goes back to work if it 's her wish?
- Inglés (UK)
that's fine. but use 'is going back to work'
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