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¿Esto suena natural? Steve Jobs grew being a confident and tenacity person thanks to his father, also he possessed a big mechanical hability for to have been helping his father when he was child. Now he has become in a large shareholder and in a great bussinessman, he know where to invest and how to begin a new companies.
¿Esto suena natural? Steve Jobs grew being a confident and tenacity person thanks to his father, also he possessed a big mechanical hability for to have been helping his father when he was child. Now he has become in a large shareholder and in a great bussinessman, he know where to invest and how to begin a new companies.
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Steve Jobs grew TO BECOME a confident and tenacIOUS person thanks to his father. HE also possessed GREAT mechanical ABILITY, HAVING HELPED his father when he was A child. Now he has become () a large shareholder and () a great bussinessman. HE KNOWS where to invest and how to begin () new companies.
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Steve Jobs grew TO BECOME a confident and tenacIOUS person thanks to his father. HE also possessed GREAT mechanical ABILITY, HAVING HELPED his father when he was A child. Now he has become () a large shareholder and () a great bussinessman. HE KNOWS where to invest and how to begin () new companies.
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Steve Jobs grew up being a confident and (you can't use tenacity I'm not sure what word you would use though) person thanks to his father.
(I'm not sure about this sentence but I think this is what you meant) He possessed a big mechanical capability from helping his father when he was a child.
(Steve Jobs is dead, so not "now" lol) He became a large shareholder and a great businessman, he knew where to invest and how to begin new companies.
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