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Inglés (US)
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In the deep night, I like reading with the music played in random order. From time to time it would blow my mind and refresh some of my recollection.It’s been a long time I didn’t see my grandma and I miss the old days of my heading for woods with DaHuang,a dog, taking the lead. The sky was blue and the breeze was fair, I was lying on the ground with fingers locked behind my head till the sunset. Nature has the power to unload the stress of daily grind, I always had good dreams when in the mountain living with my grandma. “May odds in your favor”,I expect this wish to come off at me the months to come.
Someone helps me to do some changes to make it better❤️❤️Thank you
In the deep night, I like reading with the music played in random order. From time to time it would blow my mind and refresh some of my recollection.It’s been a long time I didn’t see my grandma and I miss the old days of my heading for woods with DaHuang,a dog, taking the lead. The sky was blue and the breeze was fair, I was lying on the ground with fingers locked behind my head till the sunset. Nature has the power to unload the stress of daily grind, I always had good dreams when in the mountain living with my grandma. “May odds in your favor”,I expect this wish to come off at me the months to come.
Someone helps me to do some changes to make it better❤️❤️Thank you
Someone helps me to do some changes to make it better❤️❤️Thank you
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- Inglés (US)
Late at night, I like to read while my music plays on shuffle. From time to time it blows my mind and refreshes my memory. It’s been a long time I’ve seen my grandma, and I miss the old days of going to the woods with DaHuang, a dog, who took the lead. The sky was blue and the breeze was fair, I would lie on the ground with my fingers locked behind my head till the sunset. Nature has the power to unload the stress of daily grind, and I always had good dreams when I lived in the mountains with my grandma. “May the odds be in your favor,”(I thought/whispered.) I hope my wish will come true in the months to come.
^ This is more natural! I really enjoyed reading this, it was actually quite beautiful.
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