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Inglés (UK)
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Inglés (US)
¿Esto suena natural? Q4&16. Have you experienced a bird strike? If so, tell me about your bird strike experience.
A.Yes, I have. When I was a trainee of the Japan Air Self Defense Force, I would do flight training at Yonago airport which is situated in Tottori prefecture. Since it was very close to the sea, Bird strikes occasionally happened. One time, It was really sunny day. My flight instructor and I approached Yonago Airport after navigation training. There was no cloud and the wind was almost nearly clam at that time. I was completely careless about watching around us and just focusing on landing. Suddenly, I heard a strange sound from the right side of the plane but I had no idea what happened. We landed safely as normal and taxied back to ramp area. When I got out of the plane and did the exterior inspection, I realized that we had had a bird strike because a part of right wing was covered by blood. After this experience, I have become to be vigilant against birds when I take off and land.
A.Yes, I have. When I was a trainee of the Japan Air Self Defense Force, I would do flight training at Yonago airport which is situated in Tottori prefecture. Since it was very close to the sea, Bird strikes occasionally happened. One time, It was really sunny day. My flight instructor and I approached Yonago Airport after navigation training. There was no cloud and the wind was almost nearly clam at that time. I was completely careless about watching around us and just focusing on landing. Suddenly, I heard a strange sound from the right side of the plane but I had no idea what happened. We landed safely as normal and taxied back to ramp area. When I got out of the plane and did the exterior inspection, I realized that we had had a bird strike because a part of right wing was covered by blood. After this experience, I have become to be vigilant against birds when I take off and land.
- Inglés (US)
Poco natural
Q4&16.
Have you experienced bird strikes?
OR
Have you experienced a bird strikeattack?
OR
Have you experienced bird attacks?
Have you experienced bird strikes?
OR
Have you experienced a bird strikeattack?
OR
Have you experienced bird attacks?
If so, tell me about your bird strike experience.
If so, tell me about your bird strike experience.
A.Yes, I have.
When I was a trainee of the Japan Air Self Defense Force trainee, I wouldcompleted do flight training at Yonago airportAirport which is situated in Tottori prefecture.
When I was a trainee of the Japan Air Self Defense Force trainee, I wouldcompleted do flight training at Yonago airportAirport which is situated in Tottori prefecture.
Since it wasis very close to the sea, Birdbird strikesattacks happened occasionally happened.
Since it wasis very close to the sea, Birdbird strikesattacks happened occasionally happened.
One time, Iton wasa really sunny day.
One time, Iton wasa really sunny day.
Myas my flight instructor and I approached Yonago Airport after navigation training we were attacked.
Myas my flight instructor and I approached Yonago Airport after navigation training we were attacked.
ThereIt was nonearly cloudclam andat thethat windtime wasas almostthere nearlywere clamno atclouds thatnor timewind.
ThereIt was nonearly cloudclam andat thethat windtime wasas almostthere nearlywere clamno atclouds thatnor timewind.
I was completely careless aboutin watching the area around us and justfocused focusingprimarily on landing.
I was completely careless aboutin watching the area around us and justfocused focusingprimarily on landing.
Suddenly, I heard a strange sound from the right side of the plane but I had no idea what happened.
Suddenly, I heard a strange sound from the right side of the plane but I had no idea what happened.
We landed safely as normal and taxied back to ramp area.
We landed safely as normal and taxied back to ramp area.
When I got out of the plane and did the exterior inspection, I realized that we had had a bird strike because a part of right wing was covered bywith blood.
When I got out of the plane and did the exterior inspection, I realized that we had had a bird strike because a part of right wing was covered bywith blood.
After this experience, I have become tomore be vigilant againstin my observations for birds when I take off and land.
After this experience, I have become tomore be vigilant againstin my observations for birds when I take off and land.

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