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Inglés (UK)
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On Saturday morning , I drove a car to the village my prentes lived. Then we had a picnic for lunch on the grass. Unfortunately , it rained . So we had to stay at home untill the rain stopped.
But thanks for this rain , we were talking about recent developments for a long time . You know I didn't go to visit my parents half a year. In the evening , I baked bread in an oven with my mother . It was very delicious.
does this sound natural ? plese tell me , thank you .
On Saturday morning , I drove a car to the village my prentes lived. Then we had a picnic for lunch on the grass. Unfortunately , it rained . So we had to stay at home untill the rain stopped.
But thanks for this rain , we were talking about recent developments for a long time . You know I didn't go to visit my parents half a year. In the evening , I baked bread in an oven with my mother . It was very delicious.
does this sound natural ? plese tell me , thank you .
But thanks for this rain , we were talking about recent developments for a long time . You know I didn't go to visit my parents half a year. In the evening , I baked bread in an oven with my mother . It was very delicious.
does this sound natural ? plese tell me , thank you .
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It sounds a little unnatural.
On Saturday morning, I drove a car to the village my *parents* *live ̶d̶*. Then we had a picnic for lunch on the grass. Unfortunately, it rained *, so* we had to say at home *until* it stopped. But, thanks *to the* rain, we *talked about developments* for a long time *because* *I hadn't visited my parents for half a year.* *In the evening, *my mother and I baked bread i̶n̶ ̶a̶n̶ ̶o̶v̶e̶n̶ . It was v̶e̶r̶y̶ delicious.
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- Inglés (UK)
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It sounds a little unnatural.
On Saturday morning, I drove a car to the village my *parents* *live ̶d̶*. Then we had a picnic for lunch on the grass. Unfortunately, it rained *, so* we had to say at home *until* it stopped. But, thanks *to the* rain, we *talked about developments* for a long time *because* *I hadn't visited my parents for half a year.* *In the evening, *my mother and I baked bread i̶n̶ ̶a̶n̶ ̶o̶v̶e̶n̶ . It was v̶e̶r̶y̶ delicious.
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