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could you correct it
the clip says a man wearing costume bumps into a girl that he is interested in however the girl doesn't know who he is and just regards him as a waiter and asks for more bread however the the the man just keeps saying sorry to the girl because when the girl needed him he wasn't there which confuses the girl cuz she doesn't know who he is.
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the clip says a man wearing costume bumps into a girl that he is interested in however the girl doesn't know who he is and just regards him as a waiter and asks for more bread however the the the man just keeps saying sorry to the girl because when the girl needed him he wasn't there which confuses the girl cuz she doesn't know who he is.
the clip says a man wearing costume bumps into a girl that he is interested in however the girl doesn't know who he is and just regards him as a waiter and asks for more bread however the the the man just keeps saying sorry to the girl because when the girl needed him he wasn't there which confuses the girl cuz she doesn't know who he is.
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the clip says a man wearing a costume bumps into a girl that he is interested in however the girl doesn't know who he is and just regards him as a waiter. She asks the man for more bread however he just keeps saying sorry to the girl because when the girl needed him he wasn't there. This confuses the girl cuz she doesn't know who he is.
( using “cuz” is ok but in writing people usually say “cause” or “because”)
I changed some sentence structure because it was a very long sentence. In English we call that a ‘ run on ‘ sentence.
It was very good and I could understand everything👍🏼👍🏼
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