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could someone help me check my writting essay. i will be very appreciated your help<3
Topic: describe the place where you live in about 100~120 words.
I live in a town called Bắc Yên. I have been living here for 18 years of my life and there is nothing I can complain about it. The air is very clean and therefore everybody like walking in the early morning before going to work. For me,I love watching the sunrise. It is so stunning and I just want to capture these beautifful moments and store them in my phone. Moreover, since it is a rural area, we are mostly surrounded by tall trees and flowers. It gives us shade and fruits to eat. People are friendly and we have many domestic animals here.I am proud of my town and I am happy to live in here.
could someone help me check my writting essay. i will be very appreciated your help<3
Topic: describe the place where you live in about 100~120 words.
I live in a town called Bắc Yên. I have been living here for 18 years of my life and there is nothing I can complain about it. The air is very clean and therefore everybody like walking in the early morning before going to work. For me,I love watching the sunrise. It is so stunning and I just want to capture these beautifful moments and store them in my phone. Moreover, since it is a rural area, we are mostly surrounded by tall trees and flowers. It gives us shade and fruits to eat. People are friendly and we have many domestic animals here.I am proud of my town and I am happy to live in here.
Topic: describe the place where you live in about 100~120 words.
I live in a town called Bắc Yên. I have been living here for 18 years of my life and there is nothing I can complain about it. The air is very clean and therefore everybody like walking in the early morning before going to work. For me,I love watching the sunrise. It is so stunning and I just want to capture these beautifful moments and store them in my phone. Moreover, since it is a rural area, we are mostly surrounded by tall trees and flowers. It gives us shade and fruits to eat. People are friendly and we have many domestic animals here.I am proud of my town and I am happy to live in here.
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@oppataehyung there are a few different ways I could correct this but I’ve gone with the one that makes the least changes.
I live in a town called Bắc Yên. I have lived here for 18 years of my life and there is nothing I can complain about. The air is very clean and so everybody likes to walk in the early morning before going to work. I especially love watching the sunrise. It is so stunning and I just want to capture these beautifful moments and store them in my phone. Moreover, since it is a rural area, we are mostly surrounded by tall trees and flowers. It gives us shade and fruits to eat. People are friendly and we have many domestic animals here. I am proud of my town and I am happy to live in here.
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- Inglés (UK)
@oppataehyung there are a few different ways I could correct this but I’ve gone with the one that makes the least changes.
I live in a town called Bắc Yên. I have lived here for 18 years of my life and there is nothing I can complain about. The air is very clean and so everybody likes to walk in the early morning before going to work. I especially love watching the sunrise. It is so stunning and I just want to capture these beautifful moments and store them in my phone. Moreover, since it is a rural area, we are mostly surrounded by tall trees and flowers. It gives us shade and fruits to eat. People are friendly and we have many domestic animals here. I am proud of my town and I am happy to live in here.
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