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Journal topic:
People I met traveling
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It was when I visited Barcelona as a tourist.
I spent a day with a Korean girl who I just met in front of one of the famous buildings by Gaudi.
She talked to me in Korean since she thought I was Korean as well.
We waited in a queue together to get into the building, chatting in English.
Naturally we did all the sightseeing together on that day.
She took may hand and we walked hands in hands.
I was very surprised but at the same time I had a flash in my head about Korean culture.
Somebody told me before that Korean girls often hold hands with their friends.
I decided to follow Korean way.
It became an unforgettable day!

Hi @Yotsuba_Koiwai ! This story is SOOOOO cute and nice! Made me smile. 😊 😊 😊 😊

Your English is excellent! I just changed a few spelling mistakes and grammar issues like using plurals when you don't need to.😊 I also added a few connecting words to make is sound even more natural. Honestly, your English is really brilliant!
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My most memorable meeting with a stranger was when I visited Barcelona as a tourist.
I spent a day with a Korean girl who I'd just met in front of one of the famous buildings by Gaudi.
She talked to me in Korean since she thought I was Korean as well.
We waited in a queue together to get into the building, chatting in English.
Naturally we did all the sightseeing together on that day.
She took my hand and we walked hand in hand.
I was very surprised but at the same time I had a flashback about Korean culture.
Somebody had told me before that Korean girls often hold hands with their friends.
So, I decided to follow Korean way.
It became an unforgettable day!

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I hope this helps! I also hope you're both still friends.😊