There is no evidence to show that feeling cold makes you catch a cold more easily. This superstition stems from an experiment conducted by Louis Pasteur, a French scientist.
He observed that chickens were more likely to be infected by a dangerous disease when it is cold than when it is warm. Therefore, some scientists believed this was the case when it came to you. But this assumption has been disproved. In fact, you tend to be sick in winter, not in summer. But this is not because of feeling cold. There’re a lot of other factors. One of them is that you have more chances to stay at home with others in winter than in summer, which means that you are more likely to meet those who have infectious diseases.


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@kainhikita209 Great passage! Here are a few suggested edits:

There is no evidence to show that being cold makes you sick. This superstition stems from an experiment conducted by Louis Pasteur, a French scientist.
He observed that chickens were more likely to be infected by a dangerous disease when it was cold rather than when it was warm. Therefore, some scientists believed that this was the case when it came to humans. However, this assumption has been disproven. People tend to be sick more frequently in the winter than in the summer. This is not because of feeling cold, as there are many other factors. One of them is that you have more chances to stay at home with others in winter than in summer, which means that you are more likely to meet those who have infectious diseases.