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I want to talk about my company in a less formal way, can you tell me if the paragraph makes sense, please?
I work for ABC Inc. The main office is located in Arkansas but the corporation has many branches around the world. The company started in 1997 and Tom Hyums created it.
It currently has around 450 employees/workers and has an annual income of 6000000.
I want to talk about my company in a less formal way, can you tell me if the paragraph makes sense, please?
I work for ABC Inc. The main office is located in Arkansas but the corporation has many branches around the world. The company started in 1997 and Tom Hyums created it.
It currently has around 450 employees/workers and has an annual income of 6000000.
I work for ABC Inc. The main office is located in Arkansas but the corporation has many branches around the world. The company started in 1997 and Tom Hyums created it.
It currently has around 450 employees/workers and has an annual income of 6000000.
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I work for ABC Inc. The main office is located in Arkansas, but the corporation has many branches around the world. The company started in 1997 and was created by Tom Hyums. It currently has around 450 employees/workers and has an annual income of 6,000,000.
Looks good, just made it slightly more natural/easier to read. Small corrections. Good luck!
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@diegojjfl
do you want to say income or revenue?
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@diegojjfl
big difference
most times we talk about a company’s gross revenues
revenue
- expenses
= income/profit
you can see either one. but income suena raro
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@diegojjfl
ingresos brutos
gross revenue
no la ganancia neta
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do you want me to suggest some improvements? now that I know what you want to say
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I work for ABC Inc. The company is headquartered in Arkansas and has many branches around the world. The company was founded by Tom Hyums in 1997
ABC presently employs some 450 associates and has annual gross revenues in excess of xxxxxxxx.
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