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Inglés (US)
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Clean water and air is the reason of long existence and prosperity of the whole humanity, however, people proceed to pollute them. Instead of improving air and water condition by planting trees and flowers, they are building new factories and plants, they cut down (???) more and more trees. These conditions strongly affect our health. People leave garbage after them in forests, squares, and parks, make fires and drain waste into rivers. They don't plant new trees after cutting off trees. They constantly hunt on animals even just for fun as a result some species of animals become dying out.
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Clean water and air is the reason of long existence and prosperity of the whole humanity, however, people proceed to pollute them. Instead of improving air and water condition by planting trees and flowers, they are building new factories and plants, they cut down (???) more and more trees. These conditions strongly affect our health. People leave garbage after them in forests, squares, and parks, make fires and drain waste into rivers. They don't plant new trees after cutting off trees. They constantly hunt on animals even just for fun as a result some species of animals become dying out.
Clean water and air is the reason of long existence and prosperity of the whole humanity, however, people proceed to pollute them. Instead of improving air and water condition by planting trees and flowers, they are building new factories and plants, they cut down (???) more and more trees. These conditions strongly affect our health. People leave garbage after them in forests, squares, and parks, make fires and drain waste into rivers. They don't plant new trees after cutting off trees. They constantly hunt on animals even just for fun as a result some species of animals become dying out.
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Clean water and air ARE the reasons for long existence and prosperity of humanity. However, people proceed to pollute them. Instead of (or Rather than) improving air and water CONDITIONS by planting trees and flowers, new factories and plants are built and more tress are cut down (OR deforestation is amplified). All of those conditions strongly affect (or adversely impact) our health. Moreover, littering in our forests, squares and parks consequently contribute to fires and river pollution. The sport of hunting results in species extinction.
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