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11 oct 2015
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Inglés (US)
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Inglés (UK)
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¿Esto suena natural? Ghosts were everywhere roaming the abandoned village. There were some boys walking towards that village without fear risking their lives.
¿Esto suena natural? Ghosts were everywhere roaming the abandoned village. There were some boys walking towards that village without fear risking their lives.
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I just think some of the words are a little choppy. Try something like "Ghosts roamed the abandoned village. Some fearless boys walked towards the village."
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