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su_ya
10 oct 2021

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Could you correct these sentences?

I went to the park with my sons because my wife had to go clinic yesterday. The park where we haven’t been to has many activities , for example big sliders, jungle gyms, swings and so on.
we had to wait for a while to get into the parking lot, but there was no admission fee and my older son looked enjoying it very much.

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TwistedAlice
10 oct 2021

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Of course! Here is the corrected revision.

''I went to the park yesterday because my wife had to go to the clinic. The park where we haven't been to had many activities, such as big slides, jungle gyms, swings, and so on. We had to wait for a while to get into the parking lot, but there was no admission fee. My older son looked like he enjoyed it very much.''

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Could you correct these sentences? I went to the park with my sons because my wife had to go clinic yesterday. The park where we haven’t been to has many activities , for example big sliders, jungle gyms, swings and so on. we had to wait for a while to get into the parking lot, but there was no admission fee and my older son looked enjoying it very much.
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