- Alemán
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Inglés (UK)
But now, she wanted to be alone. She wanted to escape from the reality that she’s broken. She wanted to run away, away from everyone. She wanted to hide and she doesn’t want anyone to see her tear falling through her face, she doesn’t want her friends to see her cry like a baby, she doesn’t want her parents to worry about her thinking why is their daughter crying, because she doesn’t want them sad.
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Looks good to me. What do you think? Thank you very much!
- Inglés (UK)
'her tear falling through her face' isn't right and should be something like 'her tears running down her face'. Also the tenses seem a bit mixed in places?
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