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7 dic 2014
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Inglés (UK)
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Coreano
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How can I improve the balance between the sentence parts？
In order to succeed in this economy，small business must be creative，look forward，and show innovation and flexibility.
Our chances of a long-term relationship are slim since getting dressed up in something you enjoy，you love to dance，and you like crowds；three things I consider torture.
New potatoes out of the garden，vine-ripen beefsteak tomatoes，and freestone peaches picked by hand from our tree；these are my favorite summer foods.
How can I improve the balance between the sentence parts？
In order to succeed in this economy，small business must be creative，look forward，and show innovation and flexibility.
Our chances of a long-term relationship are slim since getting dressed up in something you enjoy，you love to dance，and you like crowds；three things I consider torture.
New potatoes out of the garden，vine-ripen beefsteak tomatoes，and freestone peaches picked by hand from our tree；these are my favorite summer foods.
In order to succeed in this economy，small business must be creative，look forward，and show innovation and flexibility.
Our chances of a long-term relationship are slim since getting dressed up in something you enjoy，you love to dance，and you like crowds；three things I consider torture.
New potatoes out of the garden，vine-ripen beefsteak tomatoes，and freestone peaches picked by hand from our tree；these are my favorite summer foods.
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You can put a full stop and start another paragraph
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I could not do this. Every sentence should be a sentence.
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Do you want the whole thing I'm sentences ?
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The second one could be improved. Our chances of a long-term relationship are slim as you enjoy getting dressed-up, you love to dance and you like crowd; three things I consider as torture
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