This is my Freaking journal!!⭐️❤️⭐️
Guys could you please help with my sentences?
I want to know the most natural and casual way to say these!!
How do you say this??

Please help me!!

1.The weather was so cold today. I feel like, today is the coldest day of this year.

2.I left from work early, because I had a skin care appointment .

3.Lately when I look into a mirror, I feel like I look older. Getting older sucks. I want to look younger forever.

4.I’ve been waiting D’s text message all day long. I don’t even like him but still I’m waiting it. ARRG!!! I hate this feeling.

4.Recently, after dinner, I have a chocolate bar, I know this is a bad habit but I can’t help it, because I stress out so much throughout the day.

5.I’ll have a phone call with Richard tomorrow. I don’t think it will go well but at least just give it a shot. I have nothing to lose.

6.No matter how cold the weather is, I do the cold water shower. It’s one of the part of my discipline.

Question

This is my Freaking journal!!⭐️❤️⭐️
Guys could you please help with my sentences?
I want to know the most natural and casual way to say these!!
How do you say this??

Please help me!!

1.The weather was so cold today. I feel like, today is the coldest day of this year.

2.I left from work early,  because I had a skin care appointment .

3.Lately when I look into a mirror,  I feel like I look older. Getting older sucks. I want to look younger forever.

4.I’ve been waiting D’s text message all day long. I don’t even like him but still I’m waiting it.  ARRG!!! I hate this feeling.

4.Recently,  after dinner,  I have a chocolate bar, I know this is a bad habit but I can’t help it,  because I stress out so much throughout the day.

5.I’ll have a phone call with Richard tomorrow. I don’t think it will go well but at least just give it a shot. I have nothing to lose.

6.No matter how cold the weather is, I do the cold water shower. It’s one of the part of my discipline.

thegodmotherinsight · Accepted Answer

1. You can do without the , in between feel and like. Maybe change "this" to "the"
2. "I left work early" will be alright
3. "I look older"-->"I'm getting older" / "Younger"-->"Young"
4. "waiting it"-->"waiting for it" Waiting always go with for (e.g. I've waited for you for who knows how long)
4. "have a chocolate bar", perhaps add a "with" before this phrase
5. "at least just give it a shot"-->"let's just give it a shot" would be more natural
6. "do the cold water shower"-->"shower in cold water"/"one of the part of my discipline"--> "one part of my daily routine" would be even more natural

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