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Are these sentences correct?
Environmental issues will be alleviated only when common people cooperate with each other through saving resources. Mass media plays an important role in realizing that.
Are these sentences correct?
Environmental issues will be alleviated only when common people cooperate with each other through saving resources. Mass media plays an important role in realizing that.
Environmental issues will be alleviated only when common people cooperate with each other through saving resources. Mass media plays an important role in realizing that.
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- Inglés (US)
It sounds really good actually! The only weird part was here "with each other through saving resources." It sounds a bit off and I am not sure what you are referring to in terms of resources. My recommendation would be to change it to either "Environmental issues will be alleviated only when common people cooperate with each other to reduce the need of resources that lead to those issues" or "Environmental issues will only be alleviated when common people cooperate with each other to develop solutions to everyday problems in the environment."
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Overall correct but I would’ve said “Mass media plays an important role in establishing that”
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- Inglés (US)
It sounds really good actually! The only weird part was here "with each other through saving resources." It sounds a bit off and I am not sure what you are referring to in terms of resources. My recommendation would be to change it to either "Environmental issues will be alleviated only when common people cooperate with each other to reduce the need of resources that lead to those issues" or "Environmental issues will only be alleviated when common people cooperate with each other to develop solutions to everyday problems in the environment."
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