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- Japonés
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Inglés (US)
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¿Esto suena natural? 1. Beyond “Connecting” to “Opening”
The gateway to the new world
2. “Opening” beyond “Connecting”
The gateway to the new world
3.Aiming to “Opening” beyond “Connecting”
The gateway to the new world
4. “Connecting” followed by “Opening”
The gateway to the new world
¿Esto suena natural? 1. Beyond “Connecting” to “Opening”
The gateway to the new world
2. “Opening” beyond “Connecting”
The gateway to the new world
3.Aiming to “Opening” beyond “Connecting”
The gateway to the new world
4. “Connecting” followed by “Opening”
The gateway to the new world
The gateway to the new world
2. “Opening” beyond “Connecting”
The gateway to the new world
3.Aiming to “Opening” beyond “Connecting”
The gateway to the new world
4. “Connecting” followed by “Opening”
The gateway to the new world
These are catch phrases of the advertising. I have no idea which is better, and how to correct. Could you modify it to be better and natural, or choose the best one?
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- Inglés (US)
Nada natural
1. Beyond “Connecting” tobeyond “Opening”
1. Beyond “Connecting” tobeyond “Opening”
Thethe gateway to the new world
Thethe gateway to the new world
2. “Opening” beyond “Connecting”
The gateway to the new world
3. Aiming to “Openingopen” beyond “Connectingconnecting”
3. Aiming to “Openingopen” beyond “Connectingconnecting”
Thethe gateway to the new world
Thethe gateway to the new world
4. “Connecting” followedand by “Opening”
4. “Connecting” followedand by “Opening”
Thethe gateway to the new world
Thethe gateway to the new world
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I think 4 sounds the most natural.