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30 mar 2017
- Japonés
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Inglés (US)
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¿Esto suena natural? I'm so sorry for taking long to write you back.
I'm in Tokyo now.
I couldn't use internet a few days.
About Tokyo's weather is getting warmer and daytime is around 60°F so you need a light jacket for in the morning and night.
I hope you could have wonderful time in Japan.
And I hope I can meet up with you guys.
Please ask me anything about Japan!
Take good care.
¿Esto suena natural? I'm so sorry for taking long to write you back.
I'm in Tokyo now.
I couldn't use internet a few days.
About Tokyo's weather is getting warmer and daytime is around 60°F so you need a light jacket for in the morning and night.
I hope you could have wonderful time in Japan.
And I hope I can meet up with you guys.
Please ask me anything about Japan!
Take good care.
I'm in Tokyo now.
I couldn't use internet a few days.
About Tokyo's weather is getting warmer and daytime is around 60°F so you need a light jacket for in the morning and night.
I hope you could have wonderful time in Japan.
And I hope I can meet up with you guys.
Please ask me anything about Japan!
Take good care.
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31 mar 2017
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- Inglés (US)
Poco natural
It is very good, but a couple things could be changed to make it more natural.
I'm so sorry for taking (a) long( time) (writing) you back.
I'm in Tokyo now.
I couldn't use (the) internet (for) a few days.
(In Tokyo, it) is getting warmer and (during the day, the temperature )is around 60°F so you need a light jacket for in the morning and night.
I hope you() have (a) wonderful time in Japan.
And I hope I can meet up with you guys.
Please ask me anything about Japan!
Take good care.
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- Inglés (US)
Poco natural
It is very good, but a couple things could be changed to make it more natural.
I'm so sorry for taking (a) long( time) (writing) you back.
I'm in Tokyo now.
I couldn't use (the) internet (for) a few days.
(In Tokyo, it) is getting warmer and (during the day, the temperature )is around 60°F so you need a light jacket for in the morning and night.
I hope you() have (a) wonderful time in Japan.
And I hope I can meet up with you guys.
Please ask me anything about Japan!
Take good care.
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