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Could you please proofread my writing and tell me if it sounds natural?
I would appreciate it if you could correct it using common phrases.
A: You know you've been giving a "story" to tips that it is called superchat.
B: It's not that it was my story. Actually, my viewers created a "story". It's pretty deep.
A: For instance, you gave your viewers the feeling of a feedback that you bought a tracksuit of adidas with their superchats and such from the beginning of your activity.
I would appreciate it if you could correct it using common phrases.
A: You know you've been giving a "story" to tips that it is called superchat.
B: It's not that it was my story. Actually, my viewers created a "story". It's pretty deep.
A: For instance, you gave your viewers the feeling of a feedback that you bought a tracksuit of adidas with their superchats and such from the beginning of your activity.
- Inglés (US)
I think the choice B good you can use it
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