‎Could you please help with my writing?🏵️
I’d like to make them sound as casual and natural as possible !!
Please, please help me !
How do you say them?

1.I’ve craved chocolate for two days and I tried to ignore it, but the cravings wouldn’t go away. They kept coming to my mind and clouded my thought. Finally, I surrender to the temptation and shoved the bar of chocolate into my mouth. It was unbearably delectable.

2.It’s the last day of my holiday and I’ll have to go back to work tomorrow. What a life.

3.I’m not a big fan of cold-weather. I’m waiting for the spring.

4.All I want to do is crawl into my bed and watch YouTube videos.

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‎Could you please help with my writing?🏵️
I’d like to make them sound as casual and natural as possible !!
Please, please help me !
How do you say them?

1.I’ve craved chocolate for two days and I tried to ignore it, but the cravings wouldn’t go away. They kept coming to my mind and clouded my thought. Finally, I surrender to the temptation and shoved the bar of chocolate into my mouth. It was unbearably delectable.

2.It’s the last day of my holiday and I’ll have to go back to work tomorrow. What a life.

3.I’m not a big fan of cold-weather. I’m waiting for the spring.

4.All I want to do is crawl into my bed and watch YouTube videos.

tiny-teeth · Accepted Answer

1.I was craving chocolate for the last couple days and I tried to ignore it, but the cravings wouldn’t go away. I couldn't get the thought out of my mind and it was really distracting. I finally surrendered to temptation and shoved the bar of chocolate into my mouth.

2. It’s the last day of my holiday and I’ll have to go back to work tomorrow. It's such a pain.

3. I'm not a big fan of cold weather. I'm waiting for spring.

4. is very natural :)

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