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¿Esto suena natural? I've been playing a brain training game. My performance data become accurate and shows that my weakness is paying attention.
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- Inglés (US)
- Inglés (UK)
Poco natural
You were right about using "a" instead of "the." Using "the" would mean that there is only one brain training game in the world.
The only thing I would change is the second sentence. It should be "My performance data is accurate and shows that my weakness is paying attention."
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- Inglés (US)
- Inglés (UK)
Poco natural
You were right about using "a" instead of "the." Using "the" would mean that there is only one brain training game in the world.
The only thing I would change is the second sentence. It should be "My performance data is accurate and shows that my weakness is paying attention."
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- Inglés (US)
Poco natural
has become accurate
has been getting more accurate
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- Japonés
I corrected the sentence:
I've been playing a brain training game. My performance data has become accurate and shows that my weakness is paying attention.
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