Hi! Please, Could you help me? Is this sound natural?
I woke up and did everything that I do it every day in morning, but today I didn't have internet because my data plan was over. I had to call my mom, and ask for a transfer and then to get the cheapest data plan. I don't feel fine because I need the internet to learn and study English. Also, I can't communicate with my loved ones without the Internet, and I must save this one.
After lunch time I went to my cousin's house. There were his wife, Yeni, and his son, Christian. My cousin was working late. Yeni had made a delicious dinner for me and we talked about everything very much.
Christian, my cute child, has grown so much. I helped doing the history homework and we talked about anime and manga. I really liked them but we haven't watched for many weeks.
I visited my great-aunt very quickly as well. She lives near my cousin and I hadn't see her for a long time. Her name is Carlota and is my mom's aunt.

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Hi! Please, Could you help me? Is this sound natural?
I woke up and did everything that I do it every day in morning, but today I didn't have internet because my data plan was over. I had to call my mom, and ask for a transfer and then to get the cheapest data plan. I don't feel fine because I need the internet to learn and study English. Also, I can't communicate with my loved ones without the Internet, and I must save this one. 
After lunch time I went to my cousin's house. There were his wife, Yeni, and his son, Christian. My cousin was working late. Yeni had made a delicious dinner for me and we talked about everything very much. 
Christian, my cute child, has grown so much. I helped doing the history homework and we talked about anime and manga. I really liked them but we haven't watched for many weeks. 
I visited my great-aunt very quickly as well. She lives near my cousin and I hadn't see her for a long time. Her name is Carlota and is my mom's aunt.

Luis_Lopez-Angueira · Answer

@Alexis_jdf I woke up and did everything I do daily in the morning. I didn’t have internet because my data plan expired. I had to call my mother, and ask her for a transfer of funds so I could get the most economical data plan. I don’t feel confortable because I need the internet to learn and study English.in addition, I cannot communicate with my loved ones without access to the internet.  After lunch I went to my cousins’s house; his wife Yeni, his son Christian were there by themselves since was cousin was working late. Yeni made a delicious dinner for me and we talked a lot about everything. Christian, cute child has grown so much. I helped him with his history homework and we talked about anime and manga. I really liked anime and manga but I have not watched any for many weeks. I quickly visited my great-aunt as well . She lives close to my cousin and I had not seen her for a long time. Her name is Carlota and she is my mom’s aunt.

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