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I was very interested about Korea culture when I’m a senior high school student. About Hanbok, Korean cuisine, Korean drama, Korean movie, K-pop, and their special views like Jeju island, Gyeonggi Province, Seoul city all of them fanscinates me a great deal. I’m impressed that people there always stand together, being polite, full of competitiveness and very energetic to live a fast-paced life. That is quite different in Taiwan, where people tend to casual attitude toward everything. I am curious about the differences between the two countries.

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I was very interested in Korean culture when I was a senior high school student. I was interested in Hanbok, Korean cuisine, Korean drama, Korean movie, K-pop, and Korea's characteristic views like Jeju island, Gyeonggi Province, Seoul city and all of them fanscinate me a great deal. I’m impressed that people there always stand together, they are polite, full of competitiveness and have a very energetic way to live a fast-paced life. That is quite different in Taiwan, where people tend to have a casual attitude toward everything. I am curious about the differences between the two countries.

这是好！你的英语很好，但过我想你学习“phrasal verbs”。那帮你，我想这。
This is good! Your English is very good for your level but I think that studying "phrasal verb" will help you.
(Sorry for my Mandarin Chinese, I know you speak Traditional Chinese but I can't speak it ;-;)

Thank you very much.

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