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I'm writing an essay. This is a part of it. Could you check? By the way, he is Barack Obama
To begin with, he has clearly sense of values and his goal. He knows what he should attach importance to and what he wants to do. For example, he values peace of the world and he received Nobel Peace Prize. People who agree with its view move people's hart and they support him. In addition, I don't want to follow to leaders who have uncertain goal beeause I can't trust, so I don't want my life is at stake on them.
I'm writing an essay. This is a part of it. Could you check? By the way, he is Barack Obama
To begin with, he has clearly sense of values and his goal. He knows what he should attach importance to and what he wants to do. For example, he values peace of the world and he received Nobel Peace Prize. People who agree with its view move people's hart and they support him. In addition, I don't want to follow to leaders who have uncertain goal beeause I can't trust, so I don't want my life is at stake on them.
To begin with, he has clearly sense of values and his goal. He knows what he should attach importance to and what he wants to do. For example, he values peace of the world and he received Nobel Peace Prize. People who agree with its view move people's hart and they support him. In addition, I don't want to follow to leaders who have uncertain goal beeause I can't trust, so I don't want my life is at stake on them.
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To begin with, he has a clear sense of value and goals .( I would put a ";" but a "." Is not wrong)He knows what he should attach importance to and what he wants to do. For example, he values world peace and he also received a Nobel Peace Prize. People who agree with his views supports him. In addition, I don't want to follow leaders who have uncertain goals because I can't trust them. I don't want my life to feel like it is at stake with them. ( this was something quick)
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