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27 abr 2016
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Inglés (US)
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¿Esto suena natural? About online ticketing website: Did I write any strange sentences? Could you correct them to more natural English please?
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* This website is a ticket agency, and associated with Japanese convenience stores.
* You need to register as a member of the website that is free of charge.
* You can make a reservation on this website. You will receive a confirmation on the website. Please print it out or make a note the given 10 digits of a confirmation number.
* Present this confirmation at a cash desk of the convenience store in Japan and pay the bill by expiration date. You will get the ticket when you paid.
¿Esto suena natural? About online ticketing website: Did I write any strange sentences? Could you correct them to more natural English please?
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* This website is a ticket agency, and associated with Japanese convenience stores.
* You need to register as a member of the website that is free of charge.
* You can make a reservation on this website. You will receive a confirmation on the website. Please print it out or make a note the given 10 digits of a confirmation number.
* Present this confirmation at a cash desk of the convenience store in Japan and pay the bill by expiration date. You will get the ticket when you paid.
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* This website is a ticket agency, and associated with Japanese convenience stores.
* You need to register as a member of the website that is free of charge.
* You can make a reservation on this website. You will receive a confirmation on the website. Please print it out or make a note the given 10 digits of a confirmation number.
* Present this confirmation at a cash desk of the convenience store in Japan and pay the bill by expiration date. You will get the ticket when you paid.
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- Inglés (US)
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I'll put all my corrections in brackets to let you know where I made changes.
This website is a ticket agency, and (is) associated with Japanese convenience stores. * You need to register as a member of the website, (which) is free of charge. * You can make a reservation on this website. You will receive a confirmation (number) on the website. Please print it out or (write down) the 10 digits of (the) confirmation number. * Present this confirmation (number to the cashier) of (a) convenience store in Japan and pay the bill by (the) expiration date. You will get the ticket when you (have) paid.
Some of the changes I made were simply to make it sound more natural, and weren't necessarily wrong. I hope this helps!
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- Inglés (US)
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Please print it out or note the given 10 digits of the confirmation number. Only mistake
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@mirari
Hello, mirary.
Thank you for your kindness. I will use the corrected one.
Hello, mirary.
Thank you for your kindness. I will use the corrected one.
- Inglés (US)
Poco natural
I'll put all my corrections in brackets to let you know where I made changes.
This website is a ticket agency, and (is) associated with Japanese convenience stores. * You need to register as a member of the website, (which) is free of charge. * You can make a reservation on this website. You will receive a confirmation (number) on the website. Please print it out or (write down) the 10 digits of (the) confirmation number. * Present this confirmation (number to the cashier) of (a) convenience store in Japan and pay the bill by (the) expiration date. You will get the ticket when you (have) paid.
Some of the changes I made were simply to make it sound more natural, and weren't necessarily wrong. I hope this helps!
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@SnowSquirrel
Hello, SnowSquirrel.
Your reply was really useful.
Thank you so much. I will study English more!
Hello, SnowSquirrel.
Your reply was really useful.
Thank you so much. I will study English more!
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@dorome
You're welcome!
I'm glad I could help!
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