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umar800
22 jul 2017

  • Inglés (US)
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1."The battle went on for sometime and after kept fighting for a while sorcerer was finally able to make some attack on the man successfully"
2."Saying that, he flew away. The girl shouted from behind.
Girl : Thank you!"

Guys these are some lines from my book, that I doubt are not correct.this book will be free to read. Please correct them if they need some correction. Ask if you don't understand anything. and let me know if the line is fine
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dioshun
22 jul 2017

  • Inglés (US)

1. "the battle went on for a while, after they kept fighting, the sorcerer was finally able to make an attack on the man successfully."

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umar800
22 jul 2017

  • Inglés (US)
@DeanLambert thanks man can you please check there are three more question that need answers. by the way I wanna say some attacks
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dioshun
22 jul 2017

  • Inglés (US)

you can say some attacks my bad

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