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Can anyone correct my writing please? Thanks
Can anyone correct my writing please? Thanks
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- Inglés (UK)
Looks great! The only thing I would say is that in this case you don't need the 'to' before 'choose'. As well as this you could also add a comma "There, the shop assistant...." but these are just minor details, your writing is fantastic and easy to read!
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- Inglés (UK)
Also, the past tense of try is spelt 'tried' :)
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@esmendrellome(THIS ANSWER JUST IN MY MIND,ITS PROBABLY WRONG))
Dear Sofie,
How are you? I hope all is Going good ,,I heard from you that you were asked me about where is the best place to buy some a bicycle and I think you should going to the Sports shop ,,they would like to you , probably,to choose the best one and moreover you can even try some bicycle before you decided to Buy it,,for me ,it isn't a good choice to buy some stuff from Online shop,, because you have to feel Comfortable with it,you should be better but in the real Shops....
however ,i buy something on the internet when it's needed for am Example : Shoes ,coz I know my size and no one tried those things before ,the package arrived at my home,, I'm looking forward for your answer!, MARIA
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