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¿Esto suena natural? I usually pick out topics for my Hinative posts from the day's TV news stories or the news papers' articles. Eight out of ten cases, I end up with sad or gloomy themes. I wish those mass media would shed more light on the brighter side of the world, and carry more happy and encouraging stories.
¿Esto suena natural? I usually pick out topics for my Hinative posts from the day's TV news stories or the news papers' articles. Eight out of ten cases, I end up with sad or gloomy themes. I wish those mass media would shed more light on the brighter side of the world, and carry more happy and encouraging stories.
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- Inglés (US)
Poco natural
I usually pick out topics for my Hinative posts from the day's TV news stories or newspaper articles. Eight times out of ten, I end up with sad or gloomy topics. I wish the media would focus more on the positive things happening around the world.
- Inglés (US)
Poco natural
Or more closely to your last sentence: I wish the media would cover more happy and encouraging stories.
- Japonés
Thanks a lot for the wonderful correction!
I could tell the revised version sounds a lot simpler and clearer.
私の場合、すぐに、モタモタした、wordy expression になっちゃうんですよね。
I could tell the revised version sounds a lot simpler and clearer.
私の場合、すぐに、モタモタした、wordy expression になっちゃうんですよね。

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