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¿Esto suena natural? Cream bread criminal case is issuing in korea. Poor guy who graduated from university was working as truck driver to feed his wife to make her teacher. He was crossing in the middle of road carrying cream bread to give it her. Because she is pregnant so she wanted to eat it. But car ran over him and he died.
¿Esto suena natural? Cream bread criminal case is issuing in korea. Poor guy who graduated from university was working as truck driver to feed his wife to make her teacher. He was crossing in the middle of road carrying cream bread to give it her. Because she is pregnant so she wanted to eat it. But car ran over him and he died.
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Cream bread criminal case is an issue in Korea. A poor guy who graduated from a university was working as a truck driver to feed his wife and also, to make her a teacher. He was crossing the road while carrying a cream bread to give his wife because she is pregnant but a car ran over him and so he died.
The whole thing is pretty dodgy but understandable. Do not forget to use indefinite articles like "a/an".
Aww. And that's very sad!! :(

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