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8 may 2016
- Japonés
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Inglés (US)
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Chino simplificado
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¿Esto suena natural? Secondly, I won’t persist in actual circumstances. Actually, if we have various hopes, most of them might be hopeless. However, even that hopes are unlikely to be realized now, there are higher possibility in the future.
please tell me what I should correct
¿Esto suena natural? Secondly, I won’t persist in actual circumstances. Actually, if we have various hopes, most of them might be hopeless. However, even that hopes are unlikely to be realized now, there are higher possibility in the future.
please tell me what I should correct
please tell me what I should correct
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8 may 2016
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- Inglés (US)
Poco natural
(Never use contractions in formal writing"
Secondly, I will not persist in actual circumstances. Realistically, our various hopes might be hopeless. However; even though hopes are unlikely to be realized now, there are higher possibilities in the future.
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