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¿Esto suena natural? In conclusion, one’s career commitment, the competition from the world and young people’s attitudes towards family life can attribute to this phenomenon, and I argue that disadvantages of delying having babies do outweigh its advantages.
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In conclusion, one's career commitment, worldwide career competition and young people's attitudes towards family life can be attributed to this phenomenon. However, I argue that the disadvantages of delaying having children outweigh the advantages.
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In conclusion, one's career commitment, worldwide career competition and young people's attitudes towards family life can be attributed to this phenomenon. However, I argue that the disadvantages of delaying having children outweigh the advantages.
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Make sure you try to match prepositions whenever possible. So in the last sentence the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. Sounds better
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Also you could replace worldwide career competition with international career competition
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