- Japonés
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Inglés (US)
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Khmer
¿Esto suena natural? According to the Japanese Ministry of Agriculture, Japan should increase its self-sufficiency rate. I am all for making a big profit. But the factors are complicated, including an aging population, westernized eating habits, fewer farmers, and low birth rate have all related to Japan’s lack of food self-sufficiency.
I think Japan would better to buy foods from widely apart places over the world so that we could secure of stable food supply with durability rather than stick to its ratio.
I think Japan would better to buy foods from widely apart places over the world so that we could secure of stable food supply with durability rather than stick to its ratio.
- Inglés (US)
Poco natural
"...I am all for making a big profit, but complicated factors, including an aging population, westernized eating habits, fewer farmers, and a low birth rate have all contributed to Japan's lack of food self-sufficiency."
"I think it would be better for Japan to buy more food from different countries so that we could secure a stable food supply rather than stick to this ratio."
Overall, your English is very good! There were a few phrases that were a bit redundant, along with some small grammar issues, but it was very well-constructed!
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- Inglés (US)
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That's better than most English speakers 😂
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- Inglés (US)
Poco natural
"...I am all for making a big profit, but complicated factors, including an aging population, westernized eating habits, fewer farmers, and a low birth rate have all contributed to Japan's lack of food self-sufficiency."
"I think it would be better for Japan to buy more food from different countries so that we could secure a stable food supply rather than stick to this ratio."
Overall, your English is very good! There were a few phrases that were a bit redundant, along with some small grammar issues, but it was very well-constructed!
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- Inglés (US)
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@monalux don't be! This is really really good, believe me. There's always room for improvement, but this one is very good :)
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