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¿Esto suena natural? At dawn I heard a strange noise in the backyard and it was scary
I thought it might be a thieve or
something. But, I found a cute black
cat trying to clamp the wall but it was
beyond her reach and I just kept staring at her and then after moment she just run away.
¿Esto suena natural? At dawn I heard a strange noise in the backyard and it was scary
I thought it might be a thieve or
something. But, I found a cute black
cat trying to clamp the wall but it was
beyond her reach and I just kept staring at her and then after moment she just run away.
I thought it might be a thieve or
something. But, I found a cute black
cat trying to clamp the wall but it was
beyond her reach and I just kept staring at her and then after moment she just run away.
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- Inglés (US)
Poco natural
At dawn I heard a strange noise in the back yard and it was scary; I thought it might be a THEIF or something. I found a cute black cat trying to CLIMB the wall, but it was beyond her reach and I just KEPT staring at her and then after A moment she just RAN away.
I capitalized the spelling errors to make them easier to find. "keep" and "run" just needed to be past tense. Very good though!
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