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15 sep 2017
- Japonés
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Inglés (US)
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¿Esto suena natural? What I did while hurricane passing our area. Just wait at home. Wait, wait and wait. Since outside is dangerous. Friday morning, the office was closed due to the hurricane and I was supposed to be at home. But the wind was not so strong at that time. So, I felt it was the last chance to go outside. I ran a little near my house. I ran across the golf course, which was closed all day. I saw some young men playing golf with drinking beer. Some of them were half naked. It seemed like anarchy.
¿Esto suena natural? What I did while hurricane passing our area. Just wait at home. Wait, wait and wait. Since outside is dangerous. Friday morning, the office was closed due to the hurricane and I was supposed to be at home. But the wind was not so strong at that time. So, I felt it was the last chance to go outside. I ran a little near my house. I ran across the golf course, which was closed all day. I saw some young men playing golf with drinking beer. Some of them were half naked. It seemed like anarchy.
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- Inglés (US)
Poco natural
What I did while hurricane passing *through* our area: *I* just wait at home. Wait, wait and wait. Since outside *it* is dangerous. Friday morning, the office was closed due to the hurricane and I was supposed to be at home. But the wind *wasn't* so strong at *the* time. So, I felt it was the last chance to go outside. I ran a little near my house. I ran across the golf course, which was closed all day. I saw some young men playing golf *while* drinking beer. Some of them were half naked. It seemed like anarchy.
Pretty good! Just a few minor grammatical errors. :)
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Please correct my sentences if you can suggest any natural ways
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Poco natural
What I did while hurricane passing *through* our area: *I* just wait at home. Wait, wait and wait. Since outside *it* is dangerous. Friday morning, the office was closed due to the hurricane and I was supposed to be at home. But the wind *wasn't* so strong at *the* time. So, I felt it was the last chance to go outside. I ran a little near my house. I ran across the golf course, which was closed all day. I saw some young men playing golf *while* drinking beer. Some of them were half naked. It seemed like anarchy.
Pretty good! Just a few minor grammatical errors. :)
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